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Like Rain
Splattered on a windshield
Falling and growing
And losing itself
And becoming another
Raindrop falls
Helpless
But while falling
Still free
Then hits
The ground
The tree
Or the windshield
I hit the windshield
Rain does not refuse space
It embraces you
Melts around you
It doesn’t shut you out
Refuse to let you sit down
It doesn’t say
“I’m sorry, there’s no more room here.”
Rain doesn’t speak at all
Only watches
YOU
Walk across the street
With your friends
And laugh
As she slips closer to the edge
Of the car
And suddenly
Becomes aware of
The abyss of the street below
Splattered on a windshield
Falling and growing
And losing itself
And becoming another
Raindrop falls
Helpless
But while falling
Still free
Then hits
The ground
The tree
Or the windshield
I hit the windshield
Rain does not refuse space
It embraces you
Melts around you
It doesn’t shut you out
Refuse to let you sit down
It doesn’t say
“I’m sorry, there’s no more room here.”
Rain doesn’t speak at all
Only watches
YOU
Walk across the street
With your friends
And laugh
As she slips closer to the edge
Of the car
And suddenly
Becomes aware of
The abyss of the street below
Something I wrote a year or so ago. I think it's pretty good: nothing fantastic though.
As always please tell me any ideas you have for improvement!
As always please tell me any ideas you have for improvement!
© 2007 - 2024 lluvia-the-wolfgirl
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I like it. Of course I've always like the rain and all. I also like the words and the personality of there's always room for you that you gave the rain.