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I am forgotten, a wisp of smoke on the wind and I

AM a dream that vanished when you woke up

STILL though, I haven’t forgotten you

HERE is where I stand, looking at your back
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Sorry it's so short. This is one of the poems my Creative Writing teacher had me write. It's one of my favorites out of the bunch.
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I remember this one. It's poetic but so sad.
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~lluvia-the-wolfgirl Jun 18, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Pretty much, yeah.
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~blackpearleyes Dec 27, 2005   General Artist
This is really beautiful. :heart:
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~lluvia-the-wolfgirl Jan 2, 2006  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks! ^_^
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~lluvia-the-wolfgirl Jan 2, 2006  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks! ^_^
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:iconlacomtesseblanche:
Normally I don't like short poems...but I think this statement is really powerful, especially with the embodiment of I am stil here, i really like it.
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~lluvia-the-wolfgirl Dec 27, 2005  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks a lot! I'm very glad you liked it!

Oh, and about the statement...the other poems(that I wrote for that class) have simerler ones, because they all had to have the same theme.
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wow
that is amazing!
It seems to catch something that i myself try to catch when i write poetry
i wish i could do that with a pencil
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~lluvia-the-wolfgirl Dec 27, 2005  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks!
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